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请问有没有语法和结构错误呢?DuetoIwantedtohaveamorecharmingshape,IhavekeptfitforamonthwhenIjustgraduatedfrommyhighschool.Atthefirstweek,Ididsomeexercisesthroughsomefacilitiesinthegymandthatwasmemoria
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请问有没有语法和结构错误呢?

DuetoIwantedtohaveamorecharmingshape,IhavekeptfitforamonthwhenIjustgraduatedfrommyhighschool.Atthefirstweek,Ididsomeexercisesthroughsomefacilitiesinthegymandthatwasmemorial.Neverthelss,Icouldn'tchange,soIwantedtorefund.However,thewomenwhoworkedatthereceptionrefusedmyquestthoughIwassoawkward.TheyestimatedthatIjustdidn'tspendedenoughtimetodothephysicalexercisesandifIwanttorefund,theycouldonlyrefundmehalfofmymoney.

Asaresult,Iacceptedtheiropinions.Iwasbacktothegymandusedsomepropertoolswhichwassuitableforme.IalsostoppedeatinganyrefreshmentssothatIbecamemoreslimafteramonth.Becausemyoilwaseliminated.

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  1.dueto很别扭,because这种简单的就很好.   2.didexercise不要加s   3.不是throughsomefacilities,可以改成with或者using   4.thatwasmemorial不知道楼主你想表达什么意思,memorial一般指怀念死人   5.refund是别人还给你钱,用getmymoneyback简单方便~   6.However和though不连用   7.Theythoughtthatijustdidnotspendenoughmoneyintheirgymandifiwanttogetsomemoneyback.   8.asaresult用atlast更好一些...   9.opinion用solution更好,因为是这个问题的解决办法嘛   10.iwasback改成iwentback更好   11.tools还是用equipment更好,前面那个facilities也是一样   12.andusedsomeproperequipmentwhichweremoresuitableforme   13.refreshment是指那些别人提供的小点心之类的,吃了让你提神(比如航班晚点的时候给你吃的零食,送的饮料.或者长途飞机上给你送的小点心)此处用snack   14.slimmer不是moreslim   15.最后一句改为:becauseireducemyfatintake.(减少了油脂摄入量)   另外如果露珠你是要打印出来或是寄email或者任何电子版的文档,每个标点后都是要空一格才能打下一个单词的哦!   希望对你有所帮助,不对的地方还请多指正.
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