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看看我的托福作文写得怎么样,这样大概能得多少分?Inresponsetotheproblem,manypeoplemayarguethatpeoplecanlearnmorefromwatchingTV.However,therealsoemergessomeoppositeswhichassertthatpeoplecanlearnmorefromre
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看看我的托福作文写得怎么样,这样大概能得多少分?

Inresponsetotheproblem,manypeoplemayarguethatpeoplecanlearnmorefromwatchingTV.However,therealsoemergessomeoppositeswhichassertthatpeoplecanlearnmorefromreadingbookthanbywatchingTV.Forme,Iagreewiththelatterpointbecauseoffollowingreasons.Whenitcomestothepositiveaspectofreadingbook.Firstofall,itisconvenienceforus.Forexample,wecantakebookontheprofessor’sclass,butwecan’tgoingtoprofessor’sclasscarryTV.Thisisbecausetheshapeofbookissmallanditiseasytocarrying.Secondly,wecanbecarriedwherevergoandbereadwheneverwewant.UnliketheTV,itcanbeusedmustcontactwithelectric.Basictounderstandingthebeneficofthereadingbookwecangetfromacademictermaspect.Bookknowledgeisbetterstructuredandmoresystematic.Somemathandchemicaltheorycanhavebestexpressioninthebook.ThisiswhytheprofessorbringthebooktoshowstheknowledgeforstudentsratherthanwatchingTVtocompletetheclass.Besides,sometimesstudentscantakesomenotesonthebooktoprotectthemfromlossremember.Therefore,peoplecanlearnmorefromreadingbookthanbywatchingTV.Itisacknowledgedthatreadingbookhasbecomeindispensableroleineverycornerofpeople‘sdailylife.Readingbooksnoronlybenefitforknowledge,butalsoforourhealthy.Forexample,whenwewatchingTV,theTVwillradiatealinethat’scalledradiationwhichcouldbreakdownthehealthofpeoplealsobringdisasterforpeople’ssight.While,ifwereadingthebook,itisagoodwayforpeoplemaintainhealth.Sothat,readingbookhasbecomeindispensableroleineverycornerofpeople’slife.Tosumup,whathasbeendiscussedabovecouldprovereadingbookcanlettingpeoplelearnmorethanwatchingTV.

刘凤霞回答:
  25左右.字数太少,我作文28分,写了432个字呢.   还有就是词汇欠丰富,用点高端的词汇与句型吧.不过切忌瞎用.
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