请各位英语达人帮我改下作文,超急!马上考研!
DearLiMing,
IamwritingthislettertocongratulateyouonyourbeingsuccessfullyadmittedtoPekingUniversity.Yourhardworkhaspaidoffandweareallsoproudofyou.
Howtogetpreparedforyouruniversitylife?Iamsohappytogiveyousomesuggestionsasfollows.First,beingindependentofparentsinlifeandemotion.Second,takingexerciseeveryday.Besides,travelingwithyourclassmatesduringthesemonths.YunnanandHangzhouaregreatchoices.Itwillbeanunforgettablememory(表回忆时,可数)inyourwholelife.
CongratulateyouagainandIwishyouhaveacolorfullifeinuniversity.
Sincerely,
ZhangWei