HowtoWritethetopicsentence 　　I.TheWritingoftopicsentence分主题句的写法 　　★主题句支持主旨句并由段内其他句子支持 　　★主题句对段落而言要有概括力而对主旨而言要有体现力 　　分主题的写作①分主题论题topic具体观点主旨的某一具体体现①分主题论题topic具体观点E.g.1IsItWisetoMakeFriendsOnline? 　　分主题--Makingfriendsonline(论题)mightresultinlackingcommunicationwithfriendsinreallife(具体观点).--Makingfriendsonline(论题)mayhelpusenlargeourcircleoffriendsconsiderably(具体观点).①分主题论题topic(具体观点) 　　E.g.2AMajorAdvantage/DisadvantageofAdvertisingonTelevision(分主题)--Themajor 　　advantageofTVadvertisingliesinitsefficiencyinmessageconveyance.--The 　　majordisadvantageofTVadvertisingliesinitsnegativeinfluenceonyoung 　　children. 　　②观点不能过于宽泛E.g.3---Makingfriendsonlineishelpful.观点过于宽泛可改为--- 　　Makingfriendsonlineishelpfulinbroadeningourfriendcircle.②观点不能重复 　　E.g.4TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood---Thefirstreasonisthatwe 　　needtokeepagoodmood.观点过于重复可将其具体化为---Firstlyweneedtokeepagoodmoodtobuildharmoniousinterpersonalrelationship.---Weneedtokeepagoodmood 　　firsttokeepushealthybothphysicallyandmentally. 　　Exercises1.Cellphoneisveryimportanttoourlife.meansofcommunication/entertainment 　　wayofgettinginformation2.Women’sroleismoredifficulttoplaythanthat 　　ofmen.constantphysicaltroublessocialtroubles③分主题要有足够的概括性非论证过程或详细的描写 　　E.g.5---Firstlythemostpopularfunctionofacellphoneisthatwecansend 　　SMStofulfillaninstantcontactwithothers.观点为具体细节非命题形式的论点可改为---Firstly 　　communicationisthemostpopularfunctionofacellphone.WecansendSMSto 　　fulfillaninstantcontactwithothersanywhereandataytime.E.g.6---Firsta100-year-oldmanwasreportedtodophysicalexerciseeveryday.Hesaidthatitissportsthatmakehimstayhealthy.分论题为具体描述非命题形式的论点应作为论据论点可为---Physicalexercisehelpstokeepourselveshealthy. 　　④分主题的表达要避免主观性E.g.7---InthisparagraphIwilltalkaboutwhypeoplegoto 　　college.---Peoplehavemanycomplexreasonsforgoingtocollege. 　　E.g.8---Inmyopinioneveryoneshouldexercise.---Everyoneshouldexercisetoreducestressmaintainahealthyweightandfeelbetteroverall.E.g.8---Ithinkstudents’educationfeesaremuchtoohigh.---Students’educationfeesneedtobeexplainedandjustified. 　　⑤分主题的表达形式要规范1分主题要用完整的句子表达2分主题最好用陈述句表达 　　E.g.---WhyshouldwekeepagoodmoodunderwhatevercircumstanceFirsttobecalm 　　enoughtomakedecisions.可改为---Thefirstreasonforustokeepagoodmood 　　underwhatevercircumstanceisthatitcanhelpuscalmdowntomakesensible 　　decision.E.g.10---Whyshouldn’twekeephealthybydoingregularexercise反意疑问句反意疑问句表述内容带有强烈主观情感可改为---Weshouldkeephealthybydoingregularexercise.⑥分主题的表达要兼顾行文的连贯与衔接保证行文连贯性的关键★主旨的重复或变体分论点E.g.11TheBestWaytoStayHealthyThesisStatement:---Thebestwaytostayhealthyistokeepabalanceddiet.Topicsentences:---Thefirstreasonforabalance 　　dietasthebestwaytostayhealthyisthat…..---Thatabalanceddietisthebestwaytostayhealthyalsoliesinthat…..---Weinsistonabalanceddietasthebestwaytostayhealthyalsobecause…..Exercises:WritingofTopicSentences添加合适的主题句1____________