高手帮看有没有语法/单词错误
Ihavemanyhobbies,suchasreading,skating,andwatchingTV.Butreadingismyfavoritehobby.Ilikereadingforthreereasons.Firstofall,booksintroducemetoanewworld,whichiscolourfulandwithouttimeandspacelimit,Throughreading,Icantraceback.toancientEgypt,thecradleofhumancivilization.ItcanbringmyselftotheUnitedstates,aglamorouslandIhavebeenlongingtovisit.Secondly,readingcanbettermyselfbyshowingmeanewhorizon.Inthepastyears,mostofmyknowledgehasbeenobtainedfrombooks.Ihavelearnedfrommanypeoplebyreadingabouttheirideasonscithee,politics,lifeandsociety.Thirdly,readingbridgethegapbetweenmydreamandmygoal.Inordcrtosucceedinmycareerinthefuture,Imustkeepreading,thinkingandpractising.Readinghasbecomepartofmylife.Everyday,Ispendsometimereadingbooks,newspapcrsandmagazines.Atnight,Icanhardlygotosteepwithoutanovelinmyhand.