Whatisagoodfriendlike?Peopleusuallysay:“Afriendinneedisafriend.Indeed.”Iagreewithit.AndIthinkafriendcanhelpmewhenIamsad.Friendsmustbehonestwitheachother.Shemustn’ttellalie.Afriendcantellthestoriesabouthertomeandkeepherpromise.Asyoucansee,it’snotdifficulttobeaperson’sgoodfriend.Butfriendsareveryimportant.Wecan’tliveintheworldwithoutafriend.
你写的很好,不过我需要详细一些,supprotingdetail.麻烦你啦!谢谢
Beingagoodfriendisn'talwayseasy,buttakingthetimetonurturealastingfriendshipiswortheveryounceofeffort.Astheyearspass,somepeoplewillstaybyyourside,butmanywon't,andyou'llrealizethateachfriendshipyoukeepispriceless.Ofcourse,tohaveagoodfriend,youmustbeone.Tobeagoodfriendanddeepenafriendshiptomakeitlast,justfollowthesesteps.
再加上这个,拼凑下可以了吧?不是说只要12句左右就行了么。