【参考一】
August2nd,Thursday
DearMickey,
I’dlovetotellyousomethingaboutmyvacation.
I’vebeenlookingforwardtovisitingthePoYangLakeforalongtime.Yesterday,withmyfriends,Ipaidavisittoit.Wesetoffat7:00ambybus.Itis8kilometersawayfromourcity,andwhenwegotthere,itwas7:20am.
Therewehadawonderfultime.Wespentthewholemorningboatingandfishingonthelake.Thenwehadpicnicbythelake.Intheafternoon,weclimbedthesnakeisland,pickedthebeautifulflowersandtookalotofpictures.
Timepassedveryfast.Beforeweknewit,itwasalready16:00,wehadtogoback.
Howaboutyourvacation?Pleasewritemeassoonaspossible.
Yours,
LiHua
【参考二】
August2nd
DearMickey,
I’mpleasedtowritetotellyousomethingaboutmysummervacationvisit.YesterdayitwasWensdayandalsothefirstdayofAugust,itwasfineandlovely.IwenttothePoYangLakewithmyfriends,whichis8kilometersfarfromourcity.Wesetoffat7:00inthemorningbybusandatwenty-minutedrivewearrivedthere.Wespentthewholemorningboatingandfishingonthelake.Thenwehadapicniclunchbythelake.Afterlunchweclimbedthesnakeislandinthelake.Weenjoyedourselvespickingwildflowersandtakingalotofpictures.Wereallyhadawonderfultime.Wecamebackat16:00pm.
Howareyougettingalongwithyourvocation?Iamlookingforwardtoyourletter.
Yours,
LiHua
注:百度一定要我顶格些,所以格式有点问题,你自己改下吧
