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批改英文作文&缩减至300字

DearPaula,

hi,howaboutyouAreyoubusytobeahorrorstorywriterIhavereadyourletterbeforeandIamhappyaboutyouareaskingmetohelpyoudescribeyourhorrorstorysetting.Ithinkmyschoolisagoodplacetobeahorrorstorysence.

Myschoolissuitabletobeahorrorstorysence.Itisbecausewhenmyschoolisturnoffallthelightatnight,itisveryscareandgloomy.IhaveheardsomeonesaythatourschoolhavemanyrealhorrorstoryWhenIheardit,Iwasveryafraid.Somyschoolwouldbeagoodsettingforyourhorrorstory.

ononeside,ourschoolsurroundingareahavesometress.Oneofthetresshasaropethatishanging.Itissaidagirlhadhangedinthattress,sinceshewascrossedinlove.Somechildrensawthegirlletdownwitharopeatnightandalsousuallyhearthepiercingsounds.

ontheotherside,ourschoolhashappenedahomicidecaseaboutateacherwhowasMr.Haihadmentaldisord.Hekilledstudentsafterschool.Then,hewassuicide.

Asweallknowthat,thiswaspostedinthemajornewspapers.Theclassroomwasrejectusing.Ithinkthisclassroomisabsolutelygloomy,emptyanddusty.Somegossipsaidthewallhadbeenseepageredliquid.Andnobodyknowthatwhatisit!

Myschooltoiletisveryscare,itisbecausethetoiletisverywearandthelightisverydim.Ihave

heardaterriblestoryfromschooltoilet.Itaboutagirlgototoiletduringalesson.Duringthegirl

goingtoilet,sheheardasoundwassinging,butthetoiletwasnopeople.Thenshescreamedandranaway

Coclusion,myschoolhasalotsofscaryplacesandstorybutIthinkthesetwoisthemosthorrible.Ihopeyoucanusemyschoolforyourstorybecausemyschoolisverysuitable.hopethissuggestioncanhelpyou.

Love,

Chris

芦亚伟回答:
  该作文错误太多,无法一一修改.另外,不知作文的题目与主旨,如何改?   中文的习惯痕迹太重.
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