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DearPaula,
hi,howaboutyouAreyoubusytobeahorrorstorywriterIhavereadyourletterbeforeandIamhappyaboutyouareaskingmetohelpyoudescribeyourhorrorstorysetting.Ithinkmyschoolisagoodplacetobeahorrorstorysence.
Myschoolissuitabletobeahorrorstorysence.Itisbecausewhenmyschoolisturnoffallthelightatnight,itisveryscareandgloomy.IhaveheardsomeonesaythatourschoolhavemanyrealhorrorstoryWhenIheardit,Iwasveryafraid.Somyschoolwouldbeagoodsettingforyourhorrorstory.
ononeside,ourschoolsurroundingareahavesometress.Oneofthetresshasaropethatishanging.Itissaidagirlhadhangedinthattress,sinceshewascrossedinlove.Somechildrensawthegirlletdownwitharopeatnightandalsousuallyhearthepiercingsounds.
ontheotherside,ourschoolhashappenedahomicidecaseaboutateacherwhowasMr.Haihadmentaldisord.Hekilledstudentsafterschool.Then,hewassuicide.
Asweallknowthat,thiswaspostedinthemajornewspapers.Theclassroomwasrejectusing.Ithinkthisclassroomisabsolutelygloomy,emptyanddusty.Somegossipsaidthewallhadbeenseepageredliquid.Andnobodyknowthatwhatisit!
Myschooltoiletisveryscare,itisbecausethetoiletisverywearandthelightisverydim.Ihave
heardaterriblestoryfromschooltoilet.Itaboutagirlgototoiletduringalesson.Duringthegirl
goingtoilet,sheheardasoundwassinging,butthetoiletwasnopeople.Thenshescreamedandranaway
Coclusion,myschoolhasalotsofscaryplacesandstorybutIthinkthesetwoisthemosthorrible.Ihopeyoucanusemyschoolforyourstorybecausemyschoolisverysuitable.hopethissuggestioncanhelpyou.
Love,
Chris