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Environmentalproblemsaretoobigforindividualcountriesandindividualpeopletoaddress.

Wehavereachedthestagewheretheyonlywaytoprotecttheenvironmentisataninternationallevel.

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Nowadays,whetherenvironmentissuesaretoobigforindividualcountriesandindividualpeopletoaddresshasbecomethetopicsofdicussion.Speakingformyself,Itendtoagreethatenviornmentissueshaveposedathreattopeople.andpeoplearefacingtotheonlywaytoprotecttheenvironmentanditalsobecomesaninternationallevel.

Themainreasonforthisistheenvironmentpollutions.Notably,withthestaggeringgrowthofpopulation,moreandmoreresourcesarebeingusedbydifferentmethods,whichhasgivenrisetomanypollutions.Thebestexampleiswaterpollutions.becauseofthis,globalpopoleareshortofwaterresourcetoliveandcultivate.Consequencely,itleadstothelackingoffood.What’sworse,theraremoreandmorepeoplewhofightagainsthungry.Sopollutionsshouldbenoticedbyglobal

Secondly,environmentproblemsarechangingtheglobalclimates.Forinstance,theexhaustedgaseswhicharereleasedbytransportanffactory,nevertheless,havechangedtheclimatformanyyearssincelastcentury.LikeCO2,CO1andSO2andsoforth.Allofthisarechangingtheglobalclimates.Morespecifically,theglobalwarminghasbeenangovernmentkillerwhichhascausedthefinancecrisis.governmentsarepayingbillionsofexpensesfordealingwithmanykindsofenvironmentissueseveryyear

Inaddtionly,environmentproblemsarethreatingtheinhabitantsofanimalresources.Accordingtothesurvey,millionsofspeciesarenowinthetrendtoextinguish.Iconvincelybelievedthattheyhaverightstoliveintheearth.Wehavenorightstodothat.AnimalaretheWealthoftheworld

Tosumup,thereisnodenyingthattheearthandpeoplearebasedontheenvironment.Peopleandgovernmentshouldbeawareofthisawarenessandputitintopraceticesbutnottojustthinkaboutit.Theenvironmentissuesshouldberesolvedbypeopleallaroundworld

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