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帮我检查一下这篇文章有语病么

MySchoolLife Everymorning,Igetupearly.Onmywaytoschooltherisingsungreetsmewithasmile.AtschoolIgetonwellwithmyteachersandclassmates.Ilikereadingaloudinthemorning.Ilistentotheteacherscarefullyinclass,andIoftenaskquestions.Ienjoyansweringtheteachers'questions.Idomyhomeworkintheevening.Itakeanactivepartinallkindsofactivities.Iplayfootballandbasketballafterschoolwithmyfriends.Ireadbooksintheschoollibrary.Italkwithmyteachersandclassmatesafterclass.Whatahappylifewehaveatschool!

汤小川回答:
  没啥大的语病,可是就一个字烂.典型的流水账作文(而且时间谁许还有点紊乱),不过表哭,可能是小朋友你年纪还小吧.下面是我帮你修改的作文,觉得好就选我为满意回答吧.Thelifeinthisschoolisseenbymethemost...
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