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LearningEnglishisofgreatImportant
Now,Englishismoreimportantinourlife.Itiswidelyemploiedallovertheworld.EveninsomeinternationalconferencespeopleuseEnglish,andinmanybusinessletterspeopleuseEnglishtoo(这个too加的合适不合适?)Asthetechnology'sprogress,wehavetolearnsciencefromwesterncountriesandshowourachievementstoothercountries.(替换成them是不是更好?)Besides,Englishhelpsusbuildupagoodrelationshipwithforeigncountriesandit'salsoagoodwaytocooperateanddevelopwitheachother(这句有些别扭,怎么改?)So,wemustlearnEnglishwellinordertomakegreatcontributionstoourcountry.
BecauseofthegreatimportanceoftheEnglish,it(这个代词有无问题?)becameacompulsorycourseinbothhighschoolsandcolleges.Therefor,weshouldsparenoeffortinlearningEnglish.