初二的英语作文给我找找语法错误的
Aboyhasabird.Hetiedstringtothebird.Heplaywiththebirdeveryday.Hethoughtthebirdisveryhappyandheis,too.Onedayhesawagirl,thegirlisverysad.Becausesheloseheimother.Apolicemanisbesidethegirl.Andtakenshetogohome.Theboythought,thebirdisassoonasthegirl,itneedhome,too.SOtheboyletthebirdtogotohome.
要70个单词啊,你减了那么少,还够吗