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"Weseethefireinthesky,wefeelthebeatingofourhearts
together."Ilovethissongverymuch.Yes,theworldneedsourlove.Inthisworld,manypeopleneedourlove,likethehomelesspeople,theoldpeople,thesickpeople,thehungrypeople,thestreetchildrenandsoon.Soweshouldgivehelptothosepeople.Althoughoneperson`senergyissmall.theenergyweallgiveislargeSoletusunderstand"Handinhandwecan,allacrosstheland,wecanmakethisworldabetterplaceforustolive."Ifeveryonegivehis/herabitoflove,theworldwillbeabeautifulfamily!