请帮我改一下我的英语作文,看一下有没有语病,如果可以的话请帮我修改一下文章.
myfavoritestar
DoyouknowWuZun?Heismyfavoritestar,andhisenglishnameisChunWu.
ofcourse,Chunisveryhandsome,andicansayheismoreprettythanotheractors.Butit'snotthemostimportantreason.
ManypeoplethinkthatChun'sjustanactor,butwhoknowsthestoryofhim?
Chunissuccessfulbecauseofhishard-working.AfterChunfinishedhisstudy,hebecameamodeltomakemoney.Athoughhisfamilyisrich,hedidn'tusehisparents'money.Thenhehadhisowncompany.AndhebecametheyoungestentrepreneurinBrunei.He'sastarinthebusiness.Now,hebecomesanactor.He'salsoastarinEntertainment.
Chunsaid,hehasaverydifficulttimebeforefamous,buthedidn'tgiveup.
AfteriknewthethingsaboutChun,hehasbeenastarinmyeyes.thestarisbrightinmyroad,andi'llfollowthestarforevertomakemyowndreamcometure.