请帮我看看我写的英语句子有没有错误(初二)
Vincesaid,"Iamtryingtosleep,butIhearamanissingingloudly,SoIcan'tsleep.Doyouknowwhoishe?"Hectorsaid,"Oh,sorrythisisme.""yousingverywell.butwouldyoumindnotsingingsoloudly?""notatall.Iwon'tdoitagain.Sovincecouldgotobed.
整篇用的是过去式,但说的话里要不要用过去式呢,有没有错误的地方,请帮我改改吧,