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求助!这种程度的托福作文考试的时候能得多少分数?题目是关于老师的题目:Doyouagreeordisagreethatateacherwhoisseriousandstrictismoreefficientthanateacherwhouseshumorsandiseasygoing?作文:Inmyv
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求助!这种程度的托福作文考试的时候能得多少分数?题目是关于老师的

题目:Doyouagreeordisagreethatateacherwhoisseriousandstrictismoreefficientthanateac

herwhouseshumorsandiseasygoing?

作文:

Inmyviewpoint,Iagreewiththesecondonetheteachershouldbemoreeasygoingandhumorousinhisclasses.

Nowadays,studentsnomatterwhoareinmiddleschooloruniversity,havetheirowncharactersandpersonalities.alsotheyhavetheirideasandthougtwhensomethingcomestothem.Theyarenotchildrensandtheyneedtoberespectedandtreatedasadults.

Incalsses,theyobviouslylikethoseteacherswhoaremoreeasygoingandhumorouscomparedwiththosewhoarestrictandserious.

Adolescentsusuallyhaveastrongsenseofconfrontingothersalthoughotherpeoplearerightexactly.sowhenteachingthem,teachersshouldconsiderthepointthestudentsaregoingthoughthissuperperiod.strictlyattitudemaybenotagoodwaytomakestudentsobeythem.Onthecontrary,itwouldactonstudentswithbadeffects.somestudentsmaynotinterestedintheclassandmaybenagetivetostudy,theresultwillbringbadthingsonbothsides.

Studentsnowaremoreacceptableforlearningwhenteachersareeasygoingandhumorous.thiskindofteacherwillmaketheirstudentsnotonlyfeeltheyarejustkeepingtherelationshipbetweenstudentandteacherbutalsotheyareconmmunicatedinaequalsituation,akindoffriendstalking.studentwillbeactivitedinwhattheteachersaid.ontheotherhand,amildtalkingwaywillbemoreattractivewhenthestudentsheardandmoreeasytoconcontratedonclasswiththemildspeaingway.inthedaylife,studentswhoaretroubledinsomethingandcan’tgetoutofitwillbemorelikelytogoforhelpfromthetecherbecauseofthebeliefwhichbuiltbetweeneachothers.theywillbemorepossibletotreatteacherastheirgoodfriends.

Inaword,Iinsistthetheteachershouldbemoreeasygoingandhumorousratherthanstrictandserious,

李陵回答:
  说实在的,作文的分段很不清晰,条理也有问题.估计不到25.   你要多分段,5段最好,总分结构——开头,3个Body段,结尾.每段头要衔接词.   句式也要多样化,文中有好多词可以替代掉.
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