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【help!Underlinetheirrelevantsentencesinthefollowingparagraphs.1.IhadmilitarytrainingwhenIwasinthesecondyearinhighschool.ThelifeinthearmywasmuchharderthanthatIhadatschool.Iwillneverforgetthelifethere.Thishared-to】
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help!Underlinetheirrelevantsentencesinthefollowingparagraphs.

1.IhadmilitarytrainingwhenIwasinthesecondyearinhighschool.ThelifeinthearmywasmuchharderthanthatIhadatschool.Iwillneverforgetthelifethere.Thishared-to-forgetimpressioncamefromboththefrom-morning-to-eveningtrainingandthelousymeals.WheneverIsatatthetable,IthoughtofthedeliciousfoodMumcooked,especiallythedishesfortheSpringFestival.

2.Thepresentnumberofmobilephoneusersismorethan15millioninchina.Andthenumberissillincreasingfast.Amongthetheseuserstherearemanycollegestudents,accountingforthirtypercent.Thus,ChinaMobiledevelopedanewincomeearnersandmobilephonearenotcheap.Thenwhydomanystudentsarenotincomeearnersandmobilephonesarenotcheap.Thenwhydomanystudentschoosetopayalotformobilephones?

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  1.楼主整段在讲军训,何时军训(开头句)-军训艰难(段落主旨)-不能忘记(细节点)-饭菜难吃(原因).但是这一句especiallythedishesfortheSpringFestival.没有必要在在这一方面做延伸了,所以这句话是多余的.   2.整段讲中国手机用户问题,前面几句是事实,thus,得出结论,中国移动发现了新的利润来源但是手机还是那么贵.不过本人觉得后面两句疑问却在学生是不合适的,这个转折有些大,而且Thenwhydomanystudentsarenotincomeearners,之前并没有说学生不是incomeearners.所以后面两句话没有联系.   码字不容易,望楼主采纳.
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