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请高手批改一篇高中英语作文HolyplaceinmymindDoyouhaveafavoriteplace?Maybeeveryonewillsay“yes”.Buttheanswercanbeverydifferent.Ifyouaskme,I’dsay“themuseum”withoutdoubt.Infact,itismorethanthefavorit
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请高手批改一篇高中英语作文

Holyplaceinmymind

Doyouhaveafavoriteplace?Maybeeveryonewillsay“yes”.Buttheanswercanbeverydifferent.Ifyouaskme,I’dsay“themuseum”withoutdoubt.Infact,itismorethanthefavorite;museumisaholyplaceinmymind.

Idon’trememberwhenandwhereIwenttoamuseumforthefirsttime.ButIsurelyknowIfellinlovewithitsinceIwas9-year-old.Ijoinedachessclubatthattimeandspentforenoonthereeveryweekend.Sointheafternoon,Iwenttomuseumswithmom.Theywereaboutmanydifferentdomains,suchasastronomy,history,scienceandart.Itwassuchagreatfeeling!

Peoplesaidthatmuseumwasagoodplacetoappreciateandrelax.Itreallywas.Firstofall,itisthequietestplacebesidethelibrary.Thereislittlepeoplehereeverydayandpeopleheremustbegentleones.Then,theculturalatmospheremakespeoplecomfortable.I’manadmirerofthehistoryofEgypt,soit’sparticularlyexcitedformetogototheexhibitionaboutwhatIlove.WhenIstandamongtheantiquehere,I’mpleased.

AlthoughIhavelittletimetospendinthemuseumnow,Ican’tstopmyselflovingtheplace.NotonlydoIfeelgoodhere,butIcanlearnmoreoutoftheclass.Ican’tknowhowthingsbecomeinthefuture,buttheholyplaceinmymindcanbeneverchanged.

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  第一段Infact,itismorethanthefavorite;museumisaholyplaceinmymind.中的than应该删掉第二段ButIsurelyknowIfellinlovewithitsinceIwas9-year-old.应该将fellinlove改为fallinlove,...
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