Inordertostudyforatest,thefirstthingIhavetodoistoreorganizeallthenotesfromtheclass.ThenIwillplanmytimeaccordingly,balancingthetimeforstudyandrest.Timeforentertainmentisgreatlyreducedtomakeroomformorerevision.Andsleepcannotbeneglectsinceit'sanimportantsourceforenergy.OftenlyIwillfindaquietcornerinthelibraryforstudyascomputersandplaystationsathomecoulddistractme.Also,Icouldcallagoodfriendofminetocometodiscusswithmeaboutthetesttogether,sowe'lllearnfromeachother.Thisishowistudyfromthetest,andisalsoIscoreintheexam.
2我的变化多大呀
Ilikedplayingcomputergamesbefore.butnowI'vechanged.
Firstofall,playinggamesarebadforoureyes.Idon"twanttowearglasses.
Secondly,playinggameswastetoomuchtime.I'mgettingolderandolder,
soIhavelesstimetoplay.
Thirdly,playinggameswillinfluncemystuding.Idon'twanttobehingdothers
Becauseofthis,now,Iwon'tplaycomputergamesanymore
Iwanttobeaexcellentstudent.I'vechangedsomuch
I'mveryhappy(gufufu~,你说你英文很差的话,这篇应该会很适合)
3我的父母的变化
Mymotherusedtobequiet.Andshewasn'tgoodattalkingwithpeople.Now,Sheisveryoutgoing.Shedoeswellintalkingwithpeople.Andsheusedtohaveshortandstraighthair,Now.Shehascurlyandlonghair.Shethinksherhairisverybeautiful.Sheusedtoliketoplaytennis.However,now,playingandspeakingtofriendsinEnglishoncomputersarehernewhabits.Futhermore,she'sstillafraidofsnakes.
Inthepast.Myfatherusedtolikespidersandotherinsects.Hethoughttheywereveryinteresting.Heusedtobeafraidofhighplaces,Heusedtobeserious.Now,Myfatherlikessports.Andheisveryfriendly.Hespeaksinafriendlyway.Hesaid:"ifyouarefriendlytoeveryone.Everywillbefriendlytoyou."
非要分三段吗

Iamaseniorschoolstudent.Now,Iamingradetwo.Tobehonest,I'mnotagoodchildorstudent.Iaiwaysthinkstudyingisveryboring.AndI'malsolazyinmysubjects.Butontheotherhand,Ineverwanttobeagirlwhohasnoknowledgeforsomethings.Believeitornot,I'mlookingforwardtobeingadiplomatofelact.SoIknowIcannotwastemytimetodosomethingawfulandterrible..Andfrownowon,I'lldowhatIcantolearnmuchbetter!IamsointoEnglish,Ihopeyouarethesameasme.如有错误,你自己改一下