请麻烦批改这篇高中英语作文
题目大概是:我(李华)从某国外网站上购买了一支录音笔(recordingpen),而最近几天发现有质量问题,我要写信给对方反应.1.音质不好2.使用不方便3.解决方案:1.退换2.维修
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麻烦英语教师或者有心的网友帮忙批阅,
DearSirorMadam,
I'mLihuawhopurchasedarecordingpenfromyourwebsitedaysago.AndnowIfindsomeproblemsabouttheproduct.Herearesomedescriptionaboutit.
First,thesoundqualityoftherecordingpenisnotgoodsothatIcan'tmakemyselfhearedclearbeforeit.Seconditisnotconvenientformetouseeventoocomplexforme.Third,there'salsosomelittleproblemthatupsetmealotsuchasthesuddenofpoweringoff,heatfromthesurfaceofitandsoon.
Ihopewecancheckwiththeseforagoodsolution.CouldIbackittoyourorcouldyourepairitforfreeIbelieveyourattitudecansatisfyusconsumer.
Bestwishes