请问你的意思是用therebe句型麽?
如果是这样的话、就这样你看行不:
Today,Istayedathometohelpmymotherdoinghousework.
Firstly,Icleanedmybedroom.Tomysurprise,therearemanyrubbishnearthebed.So,Itrymybesttobecarefulandpatienttocleantheroom.Aboutanhourlate,Ifinishedtheworkinmybedroom.The,Istartedtowashtheclothes,andIfounditisnotaseasyasIhadthought.Withmother`shelp,Ilettheclothesbecomeveryclean.
ThoughtodayisbusyandIfeltaLittletired,Istillfeltveryhappy.Formthisexperienceaboutwhichdoinghoudework,Ifoundthathowtiredmymotheris.Mother,thanksalot...
不知道是不是有点短、见谅啊.