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TPO-1Independentwritingtask

Atuniversitiesandcolleges,sportsandsocialactivitiesarejustasimportantasclassesandlibrariesandshouldreceiveequalfinancialsupport.

Nowadays,thereisadebateaboutwhethersportsandsocialactivitiesareasimportantasclassesandlibraries,I’mshockedbythedistancebetweendifferentthoughtofpeople,inmyopinionthereisnodoubtthatsportsandsocialactivitiesisimportantandshouldacquireequalfinancesupportasclassesandlibraries,thereasonasfollow.

Firstofall,developingthesportsandsocialactivitiescanreducetherateofpsychologicalprobleminthecollegestudents.Inmyuniversity,studentssuicideappeareveryyear,tomysurprise,theseyouthchosetodieonlyforsomeproblemthatisveryprevalentamongcollegestudent.Suchasdivergingwithher(orhis)lover,missingagoodchanceofwork,havingabadrelationshipofchumsandsoon.Theseproblemhavealongdistancetoserious,butsomanybeautifullifelostbecauseofthem,theessentialproblemisstudents’vulanaratheart,theycannotbreakthroughthedilemma,andwhythemcannotdoitisthattheylackofexperience.Ifastudentcanhavemorechancetotouchtherealsociety,tocommunicatewithotherpeoplewhohaveexperience,theywillknowhowtocopewiththedepression.Ontheotherhand,sportandsocialactivitiesalsocandistractpeopleattentionandreducetheirpress.

Second,thesocialactivitieshaveafunctionwhichclassesandlibrariesishardtoinstead,strengthentheabilityofknowledgeapplication.Clearly,sportsandsocialactivitiesintheuniversitiesandcollegesprovidestudentswithaperfectsettingtopracticetheirsocialskills.Irememberafewdaysbefore,aAmericanseniorstudentsinventasortofpaperwhichcantestingdecadesofcancershockingallovertheworld,howhesuccessisalsomakepeoplefeelincredible,hejustlearnby

himselfandtestagainandagain,noclass,noteacher,whatteachhimistheexperiment.So,theoryisaguide,practiceisthewaytosuccess.Regardlesshowmuchknowledgeastudentsget,ifhecannotapplytheminhislifeandwork,itisuseless.Theoriesandpracticearethetwoarmsofsucceed,ofcourse,theyshouldhaveaequalstatus.