帮忙修改一篇英文作文,貌似语法问题很多啊……
IfIWereAnAlienIfIwereanalienwholivedontheearth,butmissedherhomeverymuch.Itriedtofindthewaytogoback,butIlosedoverandoveragain.Maybesomeday,Iwouldmeetanalienboywhowerethesameasme.Andhesaidtome"Comewithme,girl!"HewouldholdmyhandandIwouldboardhissilverrocketship.Blastofftothestars,justwetwo.Wewouldwhizpasstheplanets,passtheMilkeyWay.Oh,lookatthatstarruledbyapes!Iwouldbakeanapplecakewhilehewasdrivingusthroughsomescrayasteroidthatcouldcrashusintopieces.WewouldlandontheMarswhenhekissedmyalienlips.Throughhardship,wewouldfinallygettohome.VivalatheGreatUnitedMars!