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Ihavemanyhobbies:readingbooks,raisingpets,playingdrums,drawingpicturesandsoon.AndIjoinedinmanyactivities,suchassingingcontest,danceparty,hike,ridingbicycle.Iamahighly-motivatedgirl.Ialwaysfeelcompelledtoimproveandimprovemyselfagainuntilmakemyselfabetterperson.
AlthoughIamagirlbuthasahobbythatisdrums.Mymother'sfriendisamemberofchurchchoir'ssquad,soeveryweekendIorganizedthestudentswillbeinstrumentalaccompanimenttothechurchforthechoir,Ithinkthisisverymeaningfulthing,intheprocessIrealizedthatthehappy.Havefunwithothers.
IthinkIhavetheabilitytoorganize.Asalifememberoftheclass,duringhistenure,theclassofhealthhasdonemethodically,soIwonaprizeforgoodbehavioratschool.
Inhighschool,oneofmyclassmatessuddenlyknewthatshewasaleukaemiapatient,whensheisinBeijingfortreatment,Icalleduponourclassmatescontributefundsforherandwealsohavethesupportofasubstantialnumberofparents.
WhentheOlympictorchinChina,thereareCoke,Samsung,Lenovo’sthreemajorsponsors.
AsSamsung'ssponsorshipAssistantCityManageralsoparticipatedinthetransfer.Throughthisexperience,Irealizedthetremendouspowerofteamwork,andmyplacetolearnandimprovealot.