修改高中英语作文了
人人都渴望幸福,但有时我们忙于学业忙于工作而忽视了生活中幸福的点点滴滴.你认为幸福是什么?结合生活中的事例阐述你对幸福的理解.
我的作文：
Happinessisavitalmoodwhichmanypeopleneglectfromtimetotime.Inmyopinion,happinessiseasytoachieveifyoualwayskeepausualmind.
Alargemajorityofpeoplethinkthatlifewon’tbeateasewithoutenoughmoneyorhighposition（好的地位）.So,theystriveforthegoalseverydayandhavenohappiness.Infact,theirdefinitiontohappinessisn’texact.
Frommypointofview,happinessisapositiveattitudetolife.Anunexpectedpresent,someencouragingwords,evenabunchoffreshflowerscanmakemehappy.Forme,Ithinkthatthosewhobringhappinesstoothersarethehappiestintheworld.
Lifeisabook,inwhichhappinessistheshinestpart.What’smore,happinessisjustlikeaperfume.Onlywhenyouyourselfhaveit,willotherssmellandshareit.
有些词不知怎么翻才好,就乱写了,因此括号里标注了中文.自知有许多错误!恳请哥哥,姐姐们指出.也希望能从文章结构,文采等方面提出意见和建议,
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