修改英语作文
是看图写日志的,就是说一个女孩骑自行车回家,(下雨天),从自行车上摔下来了,一个警察看见,并送她去医院,最后女孩向医生和警察说谢谢
我写的作文,帮我看看那里语法什么的有错误,如果有什么句子加上去,更好.
Itwasrainhadyesterday.Rosewenthomebybike.Suddenly,shefalloffherbike.Shelegwasbadlyhurt.Thepolicemansawherandhelpedher.Hestopataxitogohospitalnearly.Thedoctorwascarefullylookedover.After,shewasfine.Rosesaid"Thank"tothedoctorandpoliceman.