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weirddream
IhadTwodreamsyesterday.
oneisaboutmygrandfather,theotheroneisaboutmygrandmather.
Idreamedthatmygrandfatherplanedawar,andmywholefamilystruggledinthewarwithalotofbadpeople.thoughIdidn'tknowwhytheywerebad.
ThenIfoundmyfatherinadarkroom,andsomeonehidetherewhowasgoingtoshoothim.Itriedmybesttoremindmyfatherthathewasindanger,atthesametimeIgetthreekettlesnearby,inordertohitthebadman.
Fortunatelyitworked.
Finallywedefeatedthem.
ThenIdreamedthattherehassomethinghappenedonmygrandmother.
soImustdosomethingforher.suchasmakingmealsandwashingclothes.
IfeltalotoflovewhenIdidanythingforher,assheneverwantmetobetired.
Iwakedupinthemorning,feltsorryforthem,andthoughtaboutwhatIcandoformygrandparentsintherealworld.