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帮我修改这篇英语作文帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~weirddreamIhadTwodreamsyesterday.oneisaboutmygrandfather,theotheroneisaboutmygr
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帮我修改这篇英语作文

帮我看看我的这篇文章哪些地方有错误,语法错误什么都帮我改过来,或者有更好的写法也告诉我~

weirddream

IhadTwodreamsyesterday.

oneisaboutmygrandfather,theotheroneisaboutmygrandmather.

Idreamedthatmygrandfatherplanedawar,andmywholefamilystruggledinthewarwithalotofbadpeople.thoughIdidn'tknowwhytheywerebad.

ThenIfoundmyfatherinadarkroom,andsomeonehidetherewhowasgoingtoshoothim.Itriedmybesttoremindmyfatherthathewasindanger,atthesametimeIgetthreekettlesnearby,inordertohitthebadman.

Fortunatelyitworked.

Finallywedefeatedthem.

ThenIdreamedthattherehassomethinghappenedonmygrandmother.

soImustdosomethingforher.suchasmakingmealsandwashingclothes.

IfeltalotoflovewhenIdidanythingforher,assheneverwantmetobetired.

Iwakedupinthemorning,feltsorryforthem,andthoughtaboutwhatIcandoformygrandparentsintherealworld.

孟庆勇回答:
  很好啊,但是语句不通,分段不够好,写作文时要用心,反复修改不必要的不须写.
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