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Myambition
Myambitionistobeabusinessman.First,asabusinessman,
ImuststudyhardsothatIamabletopassentranceexaminationforgooduniversity.Afterthat,Iwillfoundacompany.NotonlyIshouldbeverydiligent,butalsofindagoodideatodevelopmycompany.Forexample,Ineedtalentedpersontojoinmycompanytocreatenewthingtogether.Takeittobeselledbymarket.thenIwillgetmoney,soIcanopenthesecond
company.Bythisway.AtlastIwillbearichman.