【求高一英语短文改错高手每篇10处错误,一共2篇,就是20处错误第一篇：ItisalmostfiveyearssinceIbegintolearnEnglish.I'mgladtosayI'mgettingalonggoodwithit.ButfirstIcameacrossalotofdifficulties.Icouldn't】|高中英语问答-字典翻译问答网

【求高一英语短文改错高手每篇10处错误,一共2篇,就是20处错误第一篇：ItisalmostfiveyearssinceIbegintolearnEnglish.I'mgladtosayI'mgettingalonggoodwithit.ButfirstIcameacrossalotofdifficulties.Icouldn't】

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求高一英语短文改错高手

每篇10处错误,一共2篇,就是20处错误

第一篇：

ItisalmostfiveyearssinceIbegintolearnEnglish.I'mgladtosayI'mgettingalonggoodwithit.ButfirstIcameacrossalotofdifficulties.Icouldn'tpronounceEnglishwordswe'll,socouldIrememberthewordsIhadlearned.Inclass,Icouldn'tunderstandthattheteacherhadsaid.Iamlostlostheartwhentheteachertoldme,"Keepingon,andyou'lldowe'll,"Iwasgreatencourage.istartedworkinghardatEnglish.Underthehelpofhimandmyclassmates,Imadesomeprogresses.I'mverypleaseing,andIwillworkharder.

第二篇：

OnedayIwenttothemarketandfindmanybeautifulbirdinafewcagesforsale.Iheardtwoyoungmentalked.Onesaid,"IcaughteightbirdsastheselastSunday,butnotasingleonewasalivenextmorning."Oh,God!Thebirdsarebeingkilled.Thenumberisreduceingyear.Birds,likeanimals,areourfriends.Theyeatalotofpestsandmakeournaturebeautifully.Sowemustdosomethingtoprotectitfrombeingkilled.Wehopehoweveryonecareforthem.

李勇量回答：

网友采纳

　　第一篇　　1Itis改为ithasbeen,因为since标志用完成时　　2sinceIbegin改为sinceIbegan,因为since后用过去时　　3I'mgladtosayI'mgettingalonggoodwithit时态应为过去时,所以改为IwasgladtosayIwasgettingalonggoodwithit 　　4Icouldn'tunderstandthattheteacherhadsaid改为Icouldn'tunderstandwhattheteacherhadsaid 　　5Iwasgreatencourage改为encouraged 　　6Imadesomeprogresses的progress不可数,去掉es 　　7I'mverypleaseing改为Iwasveryplease（please形容词）　　8I'mverypleaseing改为Iwasveryplease(时态为过去）　　9Iwillworkharder.改为Iwouldworkharder. 　　10socouldIrememberthewordsIhadlearned.Inclass改为Ialsocouldn'trememberthewordsIhadlearned.Inclass 　　第二篇：　　1OnedayIwenttothemarketandfindmanybeautifulbirdinafewcagesforsale改为　　OnedayIwenttothemarketandfoundmanybeautifulbirdinafewcagesforsale 　　2Iheardtwoyoungmentalked改为Iheardtwoyoungmentalking 　　3Onesaid,"IcaughteightbirdsastheselastSunday,butnotasingleonewasalivenextmorning改为Onesaid,"IhadcaughteightbirdsastheselastSunday,butnotasingleonewasalivenextmorning（因为是过去的过去,所以but前一句用过去完成时）　　4Thenumberisreduceingyear改为Thenumberisreduceingyearbyyear（一年又一年）　　5Birds,likeanimals改为Animals,likebirds 　　6Wehopehoweveryonecareforthem.改为Wehopethateveryonecareforthem. 　　7IcaughteightbirdsastheselastSunday改为IcaughteightbirdsliketheselastSunday 　　8."Oh,God!改为."Oh,MyGod! 　　9Theyeatalotofpestsandmakeournaturebeautifully改为Theyeatalotofpestsandmakeournaturebeautiful（短语makesthadj) 　　10Sowemustdosomethingtoprotectitfrombeingkilled改为Sowemustdosomethingtoprotectthemfrombeingkilled