求高一英语短文改错高手每篇十个错,一共有两篇,也就是二十处错误.第一篇：Itsnowedlastnight.Thismorningtheroadcoveredwithsnow,buttherewe'restillalotbikescomingandgoing.SuddenlyIsawawomanwalkoffher|高中英语问答-字典翻译问答网

求高一英语短文改错高手每篇十个错,一共有两篇,也就是二十处错误.第一篇：Itsnowedlastnight.Thismorningtheroadcoveredwithsnow,buttherewe'restillalotbikescomingandgoing.SuddenlyIsawawomanwalkoffher

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求高一英语短文改错高手

每篇十个错,一共有两篇,也就是二十处错误.

第一篇：

Itsnowedlastnight.Thismorningtheroadcoveredwithsnow,buttherewe'restillalotbikescomingandgoing.SuddenlyIsawawomanwalkoffherbike.Thewomanliedonthegroundandcouldn'tgetup.Iranuptoherandtriedtohelpher,andshestillcouldn'tstandupbecauseherrightlegisbroken.Atthatmoment.thepolicemancameoverwhenhesawthis.Immediately,hecalledatataxi.Thetaxidriversentthewomantonearesthospital.ThereItelephonedthewoman'sofficeandtoldamantherethewhollystory.Seenthatthewomanwaswelllookedafter,Isaidgoodbyetoher.BeforeIleft,theladythankedmeagainangagain.

第二篇：

WhenIwasdoingmyhomework,thephonerang.ShewasJane.Shewantedtospeaktomyolderbrother.itoldherthathehadleftforhomejustafewminutesbefore.Iaskedhertoringupagaintonight,andshesaidtjatshewouldn'tbefree.SoIaskedherthatshe'dliketoleaveamessage.JanesaidtherewouldbethelectureonEnglishpoetrybyavisitedprofessorintheLectureHallaround6:00tomorrowevening.Andsheaskedmetotellmybrothernotbelate.Shewouldwaitforhimatthegate.ItoldherIwouldtellhimdirectcameback.

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　　等等,我正在改,比较可靠. 　　第一篇：　　Itsnowedlastnight.Thismorningtheroad【加was】coveredwithsnow,butthere【we're——were估计你打错了】stillalot【加of】bikescomingandgoing.SuddenlyIsawawoman【walk——fall】offherbike.Thewoman【lied—lay】onthegroundandcouldn'tgetup.Iranuptoherandtriedtohelpher,【and——but】shestillcouldn'tstandupbecauseherrightleg【is——was】broken.Atthatmoment.【the——a】policemancameoverwhenhesawthis.Immediately,hecalled【at去掉】ataxi.Thetaxidriversentthewomanto【the】nearesthospital.ThereItelephonedthewoman'sofficeandtoldamantherethe【wholly—whole】story.【Seen——Seeing】thatthewomanwaswelllookedafter,Isaidgoodbyetoher.BeforeIleft,theladythankedmeagainangagain. 　　麻烦你再对一下原文,看看是否有打错的,多出了错误处. 　　第二篇：　　WhenIwasdoingmyhomework,thephonerang.【She——It】wasJane.Shewantedtospeaktomy【older——elder】brother.itoldherthathehadleft【for去掉】homejustafewminutesbefore.Iaskedhertoringupagaintonight,【and-but】shesaid【tjat_that】shewouldn'tbefree.SoIaskedher【that——if/whether】she'dliketoleaveamessage.Janesaidtherewouldbe【the——a】lectureonEnglishpoetrybya【visited——visiting】professorintheLectureHall【at】around6:00tomorrowevening.Andsheaskedmetotellmybrothernot【加to】belate.Shewouldwaitforhimatthegate.ItoldherIwouldtellhim【direct——directly】【加he】cameback. 　　原文还是有打错的啊,不过,该改的应该都改出来了.希望能够帮到你!