看看这句英文语法对不对
Haveyouenjoyedyourselves
Itismygreathonortoprovideservicestoyouonthistrip,anditisalsogratefultosupportmewithbuyingmyphotos.
AndIwillscrapethismoneyupformycollegeexpenses.WelcometovisitKoreanexttime.Goodluck.
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有没有错的要走纠正地方?