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雅思小作文求批改!剑8Test4语法不是特别好,自己练习ing,希望大家多给一些意见.ThediagramsdisplaytheinformationaboutUKresidentstraveltoothercountriesandoverseasresidentstraveltoUKbetween1979and1999,and
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雅思小作文求批改!剑8Test4语法不是特别好,自己练习ing,希望大家多给一些意见.

ThediagramsdisplaytheinformationaboutUKresidentstraveltoothercountriesandoverseasresidentstraveltoUKbetween1979and1999,andshowthemostpopularcountriesforUKresidentstotravelin1999.

Asisshowninthelinechart,ingeneral,thenumberofUKresidentswhovisitedabroadandthatofoverseasresidentswhovisitedtotheUKwereallincreasedduringthese20years,risingtoabout53millionsand28millionsrespectively.However,thestatisticofformerwasalwaysmorethanthatoflatter,andthegapbetweenthetwodatahadanincreasingtendency,especiallythedifferencedramaticenlargedfromapproximately1985to1999.

Focusingonthebargraph,itisclearseenthatFrancewasthemostpopularcountryforUKtravelersin1999,accountingforabout11millions.ThesecondpopularcountrywasSpain,andthenumberofvisitorswas9millions.Exceptthesetwocountries,therewere3countriesUKresidentspreferredtovisitin1999,whichwereTurkey(2.5millions),Greece(3millions),andUSA(3.5millions).

Overall,thenumberofUKresidentswhotraveledabroadsharprosefrom1979to1999.Meanwhile,FrancegainedthemostnumberofUKvisitors.

陈伟民回答:
  1.这是个什么图?饼状图?条形图?流程图?要先交代明白啊!具体的数据起码要出来,你在回答里就写了一个barchart,水知道你的数据错没错?2其实写的还真不错,能打在6分左右(只要考官脑子没毛病就肯定是右)数据列的很清楚...
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