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【求改英语作文OnlineShoppingRecentdays,onlineshoppingismoreandmorepopulation,ithasalotofadvantages,butiteitherexistmostdrawbacks.Onlineshoppingisunlimited,youcanbuyeverythingwhichofferedbytheinternetnomatterwha】
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求改英语作文

OnlineShopping

Recentdays,onlineshoppingismoreandmorepopulation,ithasalotofadvantages,butiteitherexistmostdrawbacks.

Onlineshoppingisunlimited,youcanbuyeverythingwhichofferedbytheinternetnomatterwhatweatheritis,whereveryouare,andwhattimeyoutake.There'snodoubtthatonlineshoppingbringbigconvenienttopeople.Buteverycoinhastwosides,whenyoushoppingonlineyoujustcanseesomepictureofproducts,youcan'ttouchit,can'tsmellit,can'tevendoanythingaboutit.Then,whatmakesyoubelievetheseproductshashighquality?

Inmyopinion,Ithinkshoppingonlineisgoodforus,butsomespecificthingsyou'dbetterbuyitinarealstore.

刘帆回答:
  OnlineShopping   Recentdays,onlineshoppingismoreandmore1popular,ithasalotofadvantages,butit2also3existsmostdrawbacks.   Onlineshoppingisunlimited,youcanbuyeverything4thatofferedbytheinternetnomatterwhatweatheritis,whereveryouare,5orwhattimeyoutake.There'snodoubtthatonlineshopping6bringsbig7conveniencetopeople.Buteverycoinhastwosides,whenyou8doshoppingonlineyoujustcanseesome9picturesofproducts,youcan'ttouchit,can'tsmellit,can'tevendoanythingaboutit.Then,whatmakesyoubelievetheseproducts11havehighquality?   Inmyopinion,Ithinkshoppingonlineisgoodforus,but12forsomespecificthingsyou'dbetterbuyinarealstore.   在这个上没有办法做标记,我用了数字来代替.一共有12处错误.其中的语法错误我改了,关于用词上的问题,你再想想了.
梁远回答:
  为什么4不能用which而用that?还有5怎么用or呢,想不通,解答一下
刘帆回答:
  先行词是不定代词的时候,引导词是只能用that,否定句中只能用or来连接的。
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