我自己为了熟悉新单词写的文章挑挑错啊
SotodayIfeelveryhappy,because,imeetaveryprettyandoutgoinggirl.Hernameissnoy,she'sskinny.andhercharacterinmyeyesisquiteperfect.She'sarepresntativeoneofschoolgirl.Hertraitisherlongandbeautifulhair.Andwehavebeentogetherforthreeyears.Ialwaysmadeherangry,butshejustcriedandthenafterafewdays.Hertolerancestillmadeustobetogether.Ourcooperativenessisalwaysthebestoneinourclass.Ithinkherdependabilityattacksme.Yourknowshealsohavesomevision.Soevenhermarksisnotasgoodasme,hercompetencystillstrongerthanme.Teacherusuallysaysthatherfair-mindadnessisheradvantage,andtherearesomanyairtueinherbahavior.Andnowshe'sdefinitelymybestfriend.Andrecently,shesendmeaalbumofhertrip.She'sverybeautifulinthephotos,withherparentsandthewonderfulsight.Ibelievei'llneverhavedepression,becausewhenIfeelbad,ourfriendshipwillmakesmehappy.Ourinterpersonaldevelopmentalwaysmakesmeproud,thereasonofwhichisthatIhavesuchagoodgirlfriendassnoy.Ithinkthere'scan'tbeanotheronehaveresemblancewithsnoy.呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵
Whatabovementionedismyfeelingnow,andmystory.Allofthemhavecometureinmylife.
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