谁帮我改改这段我写的英语作文呀!
Forexample,IdidnotlikehistoryclasswhenIwasajuniorschoolstudent.Myhistoricalteacher,however,onceleadedustovisitahistoricalmuseum.Isawmanyancienttools,buildingandworksofartfromtheperiodofhumanevolution.Thesehumanlonghistoryandculturewasdeeplyattractedme.Throughthismethod,notonlyitincreasesmyinterestinhistorysubjectbutalsobettermakemeunderstandsthecontentoftextbook.
有点幼稚.谁能帮我改改.有些句子能减缩就减缩.