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DearEditor,
Inordertomakemyparentshappy,Ineverwentto
Internetbars,dancinghallsorothercrowdingplaces.
Ilikereadingbookordoingmyhomework
athomewhilelisteningmusic.Butduringeverywinter
holiday,myhomejustbecomesaplayroom.manyrelatives
getheretoplaythecards.Iamverytired
ofthenoisethegamemakes,andmyparents
enjoyit.HowIlongforaquietlyplacetoread
booksorlearnsomthingthattheycannotgetat
schoolwithoutbeingdiaturbed!Pleasehelpsme!