求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q
Dearsir,
I’mastudentatNingboUniversity.Onsummervacation,IhavealotsoftimetodosomethingwhatIliketodo.
IthinkIshouldhaveapart-timejobduringthecomingsummervacation.
Infreetime,Iliketodosomethingaboutcomputer.SoIthinkIwilldowellifIgetthejob.
Ihopeyouwillgivemeachancetodoit.Ifyouthinkitwillbeok,pleasecall631059.
Thankyouforreadingthisletter.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Your’s
Huang