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Increasingthepriceofpetrolisthebestwaytosolvegrowingtrafficandpollutionproblems.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Whatothermeasuresdoyouthinkmightbeeffective?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.
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Today,globalwarmingbecomearealisticproblemtohumanbeing.Andtrafficpollutionresultinthisproblem.Tosolvethistrouble,somepeoplethinkthatincreasethepriceisthebestwaytodealwithairpollution.
Ithinkthisopinionisright.ButIstillcastdoubtthisbroadassertiononhowadvantageanddisadvantgetheopinionhave.Foronething,withthepriceofpetrolincreasing,whichcausedsomepeoplechoosetotakebusestatherthandrivetheircars.So,ontheonehand,itcontrolairpollutionandalsosolvegrowingtraffic.
However,ontheotherhand,itmaycausesomepeopledependmoremoneyontransportationthaneverbefore.Meanwhile,theymaydependlessmoneyonotherthingstokeeptheirfinancialhealthyandsteady.Thatinsomewaysnotonlyaddheavystresstopeoplebutalsohaveanegativeinfluenceonconsumeandrebuild.
Todealwiththisproblemmorewell-thought-out,Ithinkthatimprovepetroltechnologyisreallynecessary.Weshoulddevelopcleanfuels.Thetechnologyisalreadyavailabletoproduceelectriccarsthatwouldbebothqueterandcleanertouse.Persuadingmanufacturersandtravellerstoadoptthisnewtechnologywouldbeamoreeffectivestrategyforimprovingairquality,especiallyincities.
Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,it’stimeforustoimproveourtechnologytosolveairpollution.AndIbelievethatbyoursmart,thisworldbemorebeautiful.